

A very nice story with colorful characters
You become part of the story within the first 2 chapters.

My first ever romance novel, I just may be hooked now.
great book

Loved This as a Child
The book gives a side of the war one never gets to see.
Favorite Childhood book

FAIR
Skillful Writing and Interesting Storyline
another Whitefeather winner!Nick Bluestone is proud of his Comanche blood. However his twin brother does not embrace their Native American heritage as well. Then his brother is killed but he had asked a vow of Nick to take care of his wife & child....the Comanche way.
Elaina & her adolescent daughter travel to Oklahoma to visit with her husband's brother. Her emotions are tender as Nick resembles his brother in looks but she clearly sees that he is very different as he lives & breathes his heritage unlike her husband had. So Elaina is surprised to learn about the request her husband had asked of his brother. That Nick be her husband & father to her daughter.
This is another wonderful Native American story from Ms Whitefeather. Tender & touching! I adored the hero......he embraces his family as wholeheartedly as he does his heritage. And the ending was fantastic!!


Cross Cultural Adoption
One of the saddest books I ever readThis book is one of the saddest book I ever read, but it is easy to enjoy anyway.
thoughtprovoking yet sadI guess I kept hoping she would come to love her original family again , but it never happened. Her life was completly miserable. This book was sad and kept getting sadder until the bitter end. The book was good but those looking for a happy ending may not like it.


Slow Moving Western Tale
Interesting Account of the Texas Plains of the 1870'sEvelyn Horan - author
Jeannie, A Texas Frontier Girl, Book One
Jeannie, A Texas Frontier Girl, Book Two
This is a very good book, BUT. . .

The Movie's Actually BetterDunbar is posted at a lonely fort on the frontier, where he works and communes with nature and animals. The ecological aspect is a new slant in the western, but much of the book is still predictable and does not try very hard to go in depth or portray reality.
Dunbar joins the Comanche Indian tribe, falls in love with the one white woman (surprise surprise) and gets renamed Dances with Wolves. What you expect to happen does. He saves the Indians (how could he not-he's white!), is accused of being a traitor by his own people, blah blah. A good book for the general public, but I prefer actual 'literature'.
Enjoyable - modern version of Little Big ManAfter successfully fighting off a Pawnee attack, Lt. Dunbar (Dances with Wolves) marries Stands with a Fist and becomes a part of the Comanche tribe. In the end, he is forced to choose between his past as a white soldier or what he has now become - a Comanche Indian.
The death, destruction, and disregard for nature by the whites moves him to stay with the Comanche.
The books is enjoyable and quick reading.
Excellent Read About a Soldier and An Indian TribeEvelyn Horan - teacher/counselor/author
Jeannie, A Texas Frontier Girl, Books One - Three


Western fiction fans apparently have low standards
Ferociously Good Sequel!
HARD TO PUT IT DOWN!!!!!!!

Better than "Streets of Laredo" and "Dead Man's Walk"
Typos and mental lapses in the Old West
Yeah, I enjoyed the book for 400-500 pages, before it degenerated into a progressively typo-ridden, rambling series of brief, occasionally poignant but mainly disconnected and even trite series of vignettes attempting to sum up the lives of the various characters.
Others have described the incredibly sloppy proofreading job on this book, involving typographical errors and repeated portions of dialogue. What a mess! What lack of respect for the reading public! And the editors failed to correct the author's numerous mental lapses, among them:
* Ranger Lee Hitch is shaggy-haired and Stove Jones is bald, but several pages later, when they line up for haircuts in the town of Lonesome Dove, Lee Hitch is bald and Stove Jones is shaggy-haired.
* Inez Scull complains that she dropped her buggy whip, then just a few paragraphs later, she begins to beat Gus with her buggy whip.
* Call grows bored with the rangers' conversation and walks away, then somehow contributes a comment to the same conversation.
Have I missed anything?
I greatly enjoyed the Lonesome Dove series, but would rank this book fourth in quality.
Not another "Lonesome Dove", but then again, what is?

Reader's ImaginationFeeling Kicking Birds gut-wrenching realization that his way of life was forever lost was sobering. There could be no happy ending to this story and the lack of embellishment to the popular character's deaths, I think, coincided with the white mans attitude toward the Indians. (They didn't give it a second thought.)
The Holy Road Wasn't So Holy for allOther than that, I commend Blake for his efforts on this sad but true topic.
The Holy Road